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May 6th 2021 09:36 PM

The Yellow Pill

Small, round, yellow salvation;
Ease my mind.
Halt its frantic ascension
Before it reaches its crescendo
And all goes black.
But he bars me.
He blocks my path.
As I press on through the woods,
Brambles and burrs
Give way to barbed wire
And a concrete wall,
Like a slap to the face.
I am suffering,
I implore him.
But he refuses
To tear down his defenses,
No exceptions.
Anger boils, rises, then subsides
Giving way to despair.
Left to stew
In this frenzy of madness.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

May 7th 2021 04:30 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

The language you used in this one is amazing! I think it's one of my favorites you've written.

Everglow.

May 7th 2021 01:46 PM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This is a really well written poem and I agree that the language you've used works really well to express how you feel. Thank you for sharing. :)

.Brittany.

May 8th 2021 11:07 PM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This is incredible. I’ve always enjoyed reading your writing. So many emotions in this!

Celyn

May 9th 2021 11:08 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

You describe the feelings of being denied something you need so well. Thanks for sharing!

Mindfulness.

May 10th 2021 07:12 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

I really like this piece! :)

Arabesque- golfing girl.

May 23rd 2021 11:05 AM

Re: The Yellow Pill

This was lovely and I liked how you ended this. :hug:

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