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The Yellow Pill -
May 6th 2021, 10:36 PM
Small, round, yellow salvation;
Ease my mind.
Halt its frantic ascension
Before it reaches its crescendo
And all goes black.
But he bars me.
He blocks my path.
As I press on through the woods,
Brambles and burrs
Give way to barbed wire
And a concrete wall,
Like a slap to the face.
I am suffering,
I implore him.
But he refuses
To tear down his defenses,
No exceptions.
Anger boils, rises, then subsides
Giving way to despair.
Left to stew
In this frenzy of madness.
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Re: The Yellow Pill -
May 7th 2021, 05:30 AM
The language you used in this one is amazing! I think it's one of my favorites you've written.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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May 7th 2021, 02:46 PM
This is a really well written poem and I agree that the language you've used works really well to express how you feel. Thank you for sharing. 
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May 9th 2021, 12:07 AM
This is incredible. I’ve always enjoyed reading your writing. So many emotions in this!
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May 9th 2021, 12:08 PM
You describe the feelings of being denied something you need so well. Thanks for sharing!
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May 10th 2021, 08:12 AM
I really like this piece!
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May 23rd 2021, 12:05 PM
This was lovely and I liked how you ended this. 
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