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Soda_Voxel April 30th 2021 08:34 PM
(tw mild self harm)"Violence"
 
Have you ever felt so angry that you wanted to break something?
So furious with someone, that you had to hold yourself back by imaginary chains to refrain from hitting them?
On your very last straw, only to have that straw broken, sending you flying off the edge
Thrashing and screaming your lungs out until it feels as though blood is bubbling inside your throat?
Have you ever felt fire whirling around your clenched fists
Acid in your tears
The pressure of a thousand suns inside your deepest core just waiting to supernova
Taking out all live that dare be close to it?
That's how I feel.
The urge to break windows, tear through entire cities
Rip my eyes open by scratching away at the hot tears
And break bone by bone until I'm all gone.
That's how I feel
when I look in the mirror.
Someday soon I'll break the reflection...


sorry if i post too much here, I just have so many poems i've written.

Everglow. May 1st 2021 03:27 PM
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Please don't ever apologise for posting your poetry here. Whenever I see you've posted another poem I'm always really excited to read it.

I really enjoyed this ones emotion and I related to it a lot. I love the descriptions in it and how some of the lines are so short and simple and yet really impactful. I really liked the "Acid in your tears" part for that reason. This is so well written and I really liked reading it. Thank you for sharing it. :)

Mindfulness. May 2nd 2021 04:51 AM
Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence"
 
I agree with not saying sorry for apologizing for posting so much poetry. If you like write, then that's great! :)

I like your piece you've written.

Soda_Voxel May 2nd 2021 07:24 PM
Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence"
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Everglow. (Post 1366551)
Please don't ever apologise for posting your poetry here. Whenever I see you've posted another poem I'm always really excited to read it.

I really enjoyed this ones emotion and I related to it a lot. I love the descriptions in it and how some of the lines are so short and simple and yet really impactful. I really liked the "Acid in your tears" part for that reason. This is so well written and I really liked reading it. Thank you for sharing it. :)
Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me (and so do all other comments on all my posts, I can't reply to them all).

Celyn May 3rd 2021 11:04 AM
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This was very powerful and emotive! I hope you keep posting your poems :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ May 4th 2021 01:42 AM
Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence"
 
You definitely do not post too much. I can feel the strong anger and emotion in general in this one.

Arabesque- golfing girl. May 23rd 2021 11:01 AM
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This was lovely, thank you so much. :hug:


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