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Angry (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - April 30th 2021, 09:34 PM

Have you ever felt so angry that you wanted to break something?
So furious with someone, that you had to hold yourself back by imaginary chains to refrain from hitting them?
On your very last straw, only to have that straw broken, sending you flying off the edge
Thrashing and screaming your lungs out until it feels as though blood is bubbling inside your throat?
Have you ever felt fire whirling around your clenched fists
Acid in your tears
The pressure of a thousand suns inside your deepest core just waiting to supernova
Taking out all live that dare be close to it?
That's how I feel.
The urge to break windows, tear through entire cities
Rip my eyes open by scratching away at the hot tears
And break bone by bone until I'm all gone.
That's how I feel
when I look in the mirror.
Someday soon I'll break the reflection...


sorry if i post too much here, I just have so many poems i've written.


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Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 1st 2021, 04:27 PM

Please don't ever apologise for posting your poetry here. Whenever I see you've posted another poem I'm always really excited to read it.

I really enjoyed this ones emotion and I related to it a lot. I love the descriptions in it and how some of the lines are so short and simple and yet really impactful. I really liked the "Acid in your tears" part for that reason. This is so well written and I really liked reading it. Thank you for sharing it.


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Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 2nd 2021, 05:51 AM

I agree with not saying sorry for apologizing for posting so much poetry. If you like write, then that's great!

I like your piece you've written.


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Red face Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 2nd 2021, 08:24 PM

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Please don't ever apologise for posting your poetry here. Whenever I see you've posted another poem I'm always really excited to read it.

I really enjoyed this ones emotion and I related to it a lot. I love the descriptions in it and how some of the lines are so short and simple and yet really impactful. I really liked the "Acid in your tears" part for that reason. This is so well written and I really liked reading it. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me (and so do all other comments on all my posts, I can't reply to them all).


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Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 3rd 2021, 12:04 PM

This was very powerful and emotive! I hope you keep posting your poems


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Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 4th 2021, 02:42 AM

You definitely do not post too much. I can feel the strong anger and emotion in general in this one.


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Re: (tw mild self harm)"Violence" - May 23rd 2021, 12:01 PM

This was lovely, thank you so much.


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