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Lonely - April 13th 2021, 05:56 AM

Surrounded by people
Yet I feel so alone
I love my friends
But they don’t understand

I don’t want to bury them with my burdens
Or inconvenience them with my thoughts
They would be scared by my demons
They all cannot understand the depth of my pain

So I keep my feelings inside me
Allowing them to fester
When I’m alone, I set them free
I can’t control them any longer
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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 07:52 AM

This is a really nice piece.


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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 12:39 PM

This was really good and very relatable too! I also notice that this is your first post on TeenHelp and wanted to not only welcome you to our community but to let you know that I hope you are able to get support here too


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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 01:59 PM

Thank you both! I've posted as a guest and so I've already experienced the warm community here, I'm glad I can be a part of it.
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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 02:24 PM

Welcome to the site! Hope you're finding you way around here well enough.

You shared a very well-written piece and something that a lot of us can relate to.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to reach out.
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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 05:22 PM

I really like this poem. It's short and effective and really shows your emotions well. My favourite part was the last couple of lines as I found them really relatable. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your writing if you'd like to share any.


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Re: Lonely - April 13th 2021, 08:09 PM

This was lovely Thank you so much for sharing this with us, also welcome hope you are doing well


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Re: Lonely - April 15th 2021, 01:46 AM

I definitely can relate to this!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
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