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Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 05:56 AM
Surrounded by people
Yet I feel so alone
I love my friends
But they don’t understand
I don’t want to bury them with my burdens
Or inconvenience them with my thoughts
They would be scared by my demons
They all cannot understand the depth of my pain
So I keep my feelings inside me
Allowing them to fester
When I’m alone, I set them free
I can’t control them any longer
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 07:52 AM
This is a really nice piece.
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 12:39 PM
This was really good and very relatable too! I also notice that this is your first post on TeenHelp and wanted to not only welcome you to our community but to let you know that I hope you are able to get support here too
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 01:59 PM
Thank you both! I've posted as a guest and so I've already experienced the warm community here, I'm glad I can be a part of it.
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 02:24 PM
Welcome to the site! Hope you're finding you way around here well enough.
You shared a very well-written piece and something that a lot of us can relate to.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to reach out.
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 05:22 PM
I really like this poem. It's short and effective and really shows your emotions well. My favourite part was the last couple of lines as I found them really relatable. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your writing if you'd like to share any.
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Re: Lonely -
April 13th 2021, 08:09 PM
This was lovely Thank you so much for sharing this with us, also welcome hope you are doing well
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Re: Lonely -
April 15th 2021, 01:46 AM
I definitely can relate to this!
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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