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Defeated.
She watches silently as he readies for a night out with his friend
In the pit of her stomach she knows how this will end But she keeps her mouth shut, just like he thinks she should She’d break down crying, begging him to stay if she could He barely looks in her direction as he closes the door Her anxiety begins to rise more and more Every hour her eyes nervously shift to the clock Every little sound has her straining to hear the lock Her eyes are fighting a battle with the sandman As the fear drives her to keep them open as long as she can One o’clock, two o’clock, three o’clock, four She is defeated, she cant fight it anymore… He’s sitting on the side of the bed hovering over her She wakes with such a rush that everything is a blur All she can make out is his evil and wicked smile She can smell cheap whiskey and bile Before she can react he's on top of her, pinning her to the bed His eyes look glossy, empty, and red One hit, two hit, three hits, four She is defeated, she can’t fight him anymore |
Re: Defeated.
This was lovely to read, I liked how you started and ended this. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Sending you hugs to help you.
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Re: Defeated.
I also really enjoyed reading this piece. :)
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Re: Defeated.
The emotions and descriptions in this are amazing!
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Re: Defeated.
Quite a powerful poem. You're a very talented writer!
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