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InDig0

July 2nd 2020 02:16 PM

His Cure

He yells and screams
Shattering all her hopes and dreams
His hands are around her throat as he pushes her against the wall
Over and over again until she's curled up in a ball
He kicks her while shes on the floor
Tells her he doesn't love her anymore
How could he love someone so useless and dumb
She lays there feeling nothing but numb
Asking herself why he likes to hurt her so much
But she knew the answer, she was his crutch
Her pain was his cure, shes only the vial
But my god, it's so beautiful when he smiles...

Arabesque- golfing girl.

July 3rd 2020 12:44 AM

Re: His Cure

This was lovely. Had so much emotion in it. I liked how you ended this:) Hugs

Mindfulness.

July 6th 2020 01:50 AM

Re: His Cure

This piece of writing is really good! :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

July 7th 2020 02:51 PM

Re: His Cure

This is very powerful and emotional!

hocus pocus

July 8th 2020 06:53 PM

Re: His Cure

I really like this, especially the end. I hope you share more of your writing soon. :hug:

Celyn

October 1st 2020 06:07 PM

Re: His Cure

This was really emotive and I loved the rhyming. Thanks for sharing!

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