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His Cure - July 2nd 2020, 03:16 PM

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He yells and screams
Shattering all her hopes and dreams
His hands are around her throat as he pushes her against the wall
Over and over again until she's curled up in a ball
He kicks her while shes on the floor
Tells her he doesn't love her anymore
How could he love someone so useless and dumb
She lays there feeling nothing but numb
Asking herself why he likes to hurt her so much
But she knew the answer, she was his crutch
Her pain was his cure, shes only the vial
But my god, it's so beautiful when he smiles...
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Re: His Cure - July 3rd 2020, 01:44 AM

This was lovely. Had so much emotion in it. I liked how you ended this Hugs


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Re: His Cure - July 6th 2020, 02:50 AM

This piece of writing is really good!


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Re: His Cure - July 7th 2020, 03:51 PM

This is very powerful and emotional!


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Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: His Cure - July 8th 2020, 07:53 PM

I really like this, especially the end. I hope you share more of your writing soon.


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Re: His Cure - October 1st 2020, 07:07 PM

This was really emotive and I loved the rhyming. Thanks for sharing!


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