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Ryiga March 13th 2019 11:36 PM
Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
I feel like getting hit by a train,
Like rain, hitting the pavement of absolute pain.
The thirst of revenge never quenching,
But growing, though never I dared to do justice.

My heart's crying,
And cruely stinging like hell,
When I can't find a way to escape...
That's why I feel pain.

Tears roll down my cheek,
My life reminding me why I never speak.

Celyn March 14th 2019 09:29 PM
Re: Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
This was very powerful- I particularly like the last two lines. Thank you for sharing with us :hug:

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ March 15th 2019 12:06 AM
Re: Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
I agree with liking the last two lines!

Arabesque- golfing girl. March 18th 2019 07:26 PM
Re: Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
This was lovely! Great job and lots of Hugs.

Reggy777 April 10th 2019 12:07 PM
Re: Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
Powerful, like it!

DeletedAccount69 April 15th 2019 02:31 PM
Re: Why I Feel Pain, mini - poem
 
I agree that this is powerful. Thank you for sharing


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