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JollyRancher.

July 25th 2018 02:50 AM

Lyric Poem

There is something on my mind,
Who am i supposed to be?
Im hurting like hell,
I'm scared to lose myself,
Im always wanting more,
But never giving,

Yet you made me a believer,
For years, this is all I have known,

Now Im heading for a blackout,
Im scared of letting go,
Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
For this has been my home,
For this has had my heart,

As long as you are with me,
I know where I have been,

Please take me back to the start,
It would be such a shame for us to part.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

July 25th 2018 03:26 AM

Re: Lyric Poem

I really like the beginning and end of this one! I love when you post.

Celyn

July 25th 2018 01:05 PM

Re: Lyric Poem

I can relate to the first stanza quite a bit. Thank you for sharing :)

Arabesque- golfing girl.

July 25th 2018 02:04 PM

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This was really good.

DeletedAccount69

July 25th 2018 05:34 PM

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I thought this was really good! Thank you for sharing.

MsNobleEleanor

August 3rd 2018 01:58 PM

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Your piece was really strong with emotions. I really liked reading it.
Thank you for sharing. :)

DeletedAccount29

August 3rd 2018 03:32 PM

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As always with your work, I really liked it!

I can definitely relate to the first stanza.

Storyteller.

August 5th 2018 11:20 AM

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This had a really good rhythm, and I could relate to it a lot. Thank you for sharing!

.Brittany.

August 22nd 2018 12:54 AM

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Same with everyone above, I can really relate with the first part, I love it a lot!

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