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Lyric Poem - July 25th 2018, 02:50 AM
There is something on my mind,
Who am i supposed to be?
Im hurting like hell,
I'm scared to lose myself,
Im always wanting more,
But never giving,

Yet you made me a believer,
For years, this is all I have known,

Now Im heading for a blackout,
Im scared of letting go,
Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
For this has been my home,
For this has had my heart,

As long as you are with me,
I know where I have been,

Please take me back to the start,
It would be such a shame for us to part.

Used to be Misslostintears
If you ever want to talk or something, i am always here.
I've been around for a while now.

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THEY ARE WRONG
IF someone tries to destroy your dreams,
SHOW THEM THAT WHAT THEY DO IS NOT GOING TO STOP YOU

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Re: Lyric Poem - July 25th 2018, 03:26 AM
I really like the beginning and end of this one! I love when you post.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: Lyric Poem - July 25th 2018, 01:05 PM
I can relate to the first stanza quite a bit. Thank you for sharing

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Re: Lyric Poem - July 25th 2018, 02:04 PM
This was really good.

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It’s the rhythm
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It’s the expression
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in happiness, joy, sadness and envy.
-Jacques d’Ambroise''
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Re: Lyric Poem - July 25th 2018, 05:34 PM
I thought this was really good! Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Lyric Poem - August 3rd 2018, 01:58 PM
Your piece was really strong with emotions. I really liked reading it.
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Re: Lyric Poem - August 3rd 2018, 03:32 PM
As always with your work, I really liked it!

I can definitely relate to the first stanza.
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Re: Lyric Poem - August 5th 2018, 11:20 AM
This had a really good rhythm, and I could relate to it a lot. Thank you for sharing!

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Re: Lyric Poem - August 22nd 2018, 12:54 AM
Same with everyone above, I can really relate with the first part, I love it a lot!


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