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How's that for a tiger?
A tiger does not change its stripes
Not when the stripes are blood red and skin white So easy to lose sight Trapped behind bars The way out will leave scars Oh, they will leave scars grip, slash, rip, bleed grip, slash, rip, bleed Grip, fist, whip bruise Fast, fast, fast, There's no time to lose They tell me to use the toolbox of skills The only toolbox I know is the one that kills Tell me again, what recovery means? How we went around the room, sharing our hopes and dreams I said I hope to hope to hope to hope To find out what I hope They smiled at that joke No one knows I seriously have lost hope Tell me again how all I gotta do is talk it through cause your family really loves you Why can't I be the judge for once? Day in and day out I live with them Yes, I have mental illness (No that does not mean I am always wrong) Yes, I am timid (But why should that make me worthless and unlovable?) Yes, I struggle with words (But if you took the time to listen, my communication problems would start to calm by itself) Can't you see how deep this runs? If only they cared? If only they cared. The torment goes on and on and on Years later, same bars but a tiger does not change its stripes Not when the stripes are blood red and skin white The colors of freedom At what price? Punishments for being at fault The way out left it's marks Oh it left it's mark The battle still goes on grip, slash, rip, bleed grip, slash, rip, bleed Grip, fist, whip bruise Fast, fast, fast, How is that for a tiger? |
Re: How's that for a tiger?
I really liked this. You are so talented! I hope you will continue sharing some more of your poems and maybe some more of your art based stuff as well. :hug:
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I really like the title, and well the whole piece really.
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I like the flow here, and the images you used with the tiger. Well done. :hug:
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I really liked this. Hugs.
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I really like this. The imagery of the colors was powerful. You're talented. :hug:
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
thank you all of you for the feedback!
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I think this might be my favourite piece from you so far. I can't really pinpoint what exactly about it resonated with me, but I think the whole piece was brilliant. Thank you so much for sharing. :hug:
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I love it! Really well written.
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
Thank you Chess and Marcus
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
I really loved this and it was beautifully written. D: I especially loved this part:
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Re: How's that for a tiger?
This is incredibly written! I loved the description in it
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