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I can't get enough
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hello are you there? -
August 3rd 2017, 10:30 AM
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Hello are you there?
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
I'm walking on a tightrope,
Are you there?
Ready and waiting to catch me when I fall?
Can you see me?
Can you hear me?
Hello are you there?
I'm scared and alone,
I need someone,
I'm lost and empty,
Are you there?
Hello are you there?
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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Feline the love.
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August 3rd 2017, 02:49 PM
This was a nice read, I can feel the emotion here. Thank you for sharing.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Living the dream.
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August 4th 2017, 02:33 AM
I like how you asked questions in this.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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August 5th 2017, 11:40 PM
I liked the questions you asked. I felt it had a lot of emotion in it. 
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Doing fine by design.
 Jeez, get a life!
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August 6th 2017, 02:26 AM
I really like the repetition of the questions in this one. Thanks for sharing!
"Love means never having to say you're a werewolf."
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Jeez, get a life!
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August 6th 2017, 08:16 PM
This was nice. I liked it. Hugs.
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 7th 2017, 07:09 AM
I thought the way this was written was interesting because I liked how you used questions! Thanks for sharing. 
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 8th 2017, 01:20 PM
the repeated lines at different points were a great idea
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Did you miss me?
Outside, huh?
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 13th 2017, 10:27 PM
The emotion in this was really strong. When I read it, it was almost like some of the repetitions were echoes, which seemed to reflect the loneliness which I think was being put across. It's a really well written poem.
"Why want another universe if this one has dogs?"
Matt Haig - The Midnight Library
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