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NeuroBeautiful

July 13th 2017 12:48 AM

I messed up

I messed up again
Close the door
lock me in
I have messed up tonight badly

I messed up again
I tried so hard
lock me in
I am a monster inside

I messed up again
Let the hell I created
Burn me up to ashes
Let my own gallows strangle me

I don't want to open up
I don't want to let you in
I don't want air to breathe

Because...I messed
up, badly
again

DeletedAccount42

July 13th 2017 03:06 AM

Re: I messed up

I can really feel the emotion through this. Sorry about what's happening right now. PM me whenever you need to talk! <sending love your way>

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

July 13th 2017 03:44 PM

Re: I messed up

I really like how this flows. You can do it!

Everglow.

July 13th 2017 11:22 PM

Re: I messed up

I like how each verse starts the same way, to it's repetitive enough to be quite catchy. It's also short and to the point so it delivers the message really well!

matthewmatters

July 14th 2017 10:31 PM

Re: I messed up

this really captures a specific situation and comes from all that helped lead up to the moment of feeling like that

hocus pocus

July 16th 2017 02:18 PM

Re: I messed up

I agree about the repetition making it catchy! Hope to read more from you soon. <3

DeletedAccount69

July 17th 2017 04:41 AM

Re: I messed up

I really liked this and could feel the emotions that were behind this. Hope you will share more soon.

NeuroBeautiful

July 25th 2017 01:11 AM

Re: I messed up

thank you everyone

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