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I love you in light and in darkness
Wrote this for a friend. I didn't share it with them yet because I'm nervous at how it sounds. Feedback appreciated.
I love you in light and in darkness In heavy wind and rain On days when the sun is so bright And on days you can't see the stars at night I love you even when i dont have words I may not know what to say But know my arms are wide open I want to be here for you in any way I love you when you're holding tight to your end of our thread And at times when you just CAN'T, anymore You find yourself stuck in bed With pillows pushing against your ears Blankets over your head When you've shut yourself in To keep the haaken-kraks howls out When you're walking in the purple garden Feeling like yourself again Free, Your spirit rejoices Relearning to fly; relearning the beauty You have the answers within Even if you're not there, yet I am not going anywhere Whatever the situation may be You'll always be my hybrid For you, I will do The care bear stare And celebrate every unbirthday moment I will not be too far behind you Nor speed too far ahead I will be right by your side You have in me, a friend |
Re: I love you in light and in darkness
I thought this was well written. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: I love you in light and in darkness
I think you should show them! It sounds really nice!
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Re: I love you in light and in darkness
This actually made me tear up a bit. I love it. I think that you should send it to your friend,
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Re: I love you in light and in darkness
you did great with this.. the opening verse in particular.. definately shouldnt be shy to share it with anyone it concerns
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Re: I love you in light and in darkness
I showed it to my friend. They said it made them cry (I'm guessing in a good way :p) . Thank you for the feedback everyone.
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