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hestina22 June 3rd 2017 12:02 PM

Poem
 
Sometimes she doesn't know what else to do
So sometimes she gathers all of the food that her tired arms can carry
And hides it away.
It's her little secret.
No one else will see. No one else will know.

When night comes around,
When everyone else is fast asleep,
Including all those people who have created this,
She loses all control
And soon all the food has gone.

She know nothing has changed
And perhaps never will.
But this is the only thing she can control.
The only thing that makes her feel better.
It's her little secret.
No one will ever see.
No one will ever know.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ June 4th 2017 11:42 PM

Re: Poem
 
This definitely tells a story. You can do this!

hocus pocus June 7th 2017 12:18 PM

Re: Poem
 
I agree, there's definitely a story here. I liked the repetition and the mentions of doing it for control. Keep hanging on.

matthewmatters June 7th 2017 02:53 PM

Re: Poem
 
normally i think of someone who can't bring themself to eat, but this time, it's someone who is eating to excess and addicted to food, essentially

.Brittany. June 20th 2017 11:11 PM

Re: Poem
 
This was very well written. Definitely keep it up.Stay Strong.


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