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The place that love forgot - May 27th 2017, 12:37 AM
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It was never a home
More of a hell hole
Love and hate combined
It was a house
Held together with bricks and mortar
Love was forgot
Replaced by bruises
Wayward outlandish excuses
Lies and dishonesty riddled their lives
It was a place love forgot
Taught not talk bad of the secrets within
It was never a home
Just a shelter and a place to sleep
Held together with bricks and mortar
In their beds they silently would weep
While mum and dad drank the poisionois drinks
Love never lived
Only hate survived
It was a place love forgot

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Re: The place that love forgot - May 27th 2017, 01:52 PM
I like how you used repetition. Thanks for sharing.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: The place that love forgot - May 27th 2017, 08:43 PM
I love the repetition in this throughout the poem, it made it really powerful and I think reinforced the atmosphere that this piece of writing had within it. Keep writing! I've seen a few of your poems here and they're always very good.

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Re: The place that love forgot - May 28th 2017, 04:08 AM
I really liked this one. Thank you for sharing. I love reading your work.

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Re: The place that love forgot - May 28th 2017, 06:22 PM
I agree with liking the repetition, as well as the emotion!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: The place that love forgot - May 29th 2017, 11:59 PM
Thank you for sharing this with us. It's very well written.


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