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Real food
Wrote this from today. Im on my way now to get food for my sisters becsuse this is a true story and we really do not have food atm.
Ideally I would have wanted to choose two colors and make the daddy lines to progressively fade lighter and lighter and the responses to progressively get darker and dark to illustrate how the child speaker gets wwake whole the father gets stronger control but i wI'll go back and edit later. . [Daddy I'm really hungry Thats too bad. You've had a banana and nuts for the day. That's plenty. Look at the fridge. I'm busy now. Daddy I'm really hungry. There's no food. Don't you lecture me. I don't know what's wrong with you. Daddy I'm hungry. I can't concentrate in school Now you're fighting. Don't ever talk to me again. I do not speak people who whine and complain. I am so good to you. This is how you say thank you? Daddy.... Don't call me daddy. |
Re: Real food
So good and heartbreaking. :'( :hug: <3
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I agree, this definitely is heartbreaking and also reminds me of someone I know.
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Thank you Jenna and Dez
I tried doing it the color coded way but Idk... Quote:
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I like how you wrote this. The way you ended it showed emotion. :hug:
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I'm sorry you have to go through all this, but this is a really well-written piece. I especially like it with the colour-coding. :hug:
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This was intense, very well written.
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