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Fat
When you see your nieces
In a photo online And the first thing you say, is "Woah they're so fat!" I wonder if I ever became overweight How much stress I will have to endure My doctor says I am at a healthy weight I always had been And yet you managed to convince me That I'm fat, that I'm much taller than I am, that I can never feel okay in the clothes I wear If you can judge your nieces so harshly, How much more is your own daughter scrutinized? If I ever gained weight, I don't know if you'd still love me I already don't know if you love me Or if you see me as the one mistake The one blotch of paint splatter You need to fix For your life to be a true masterpiece Because there's no space for me Becsuse if I shrink small enough I might just disappear Maybe then, one long brush stroke can erase me With somrthing better painted over No one would even notice me underneath But that's the point I starve myself as a reminder, That I am fat That I am ugly That I will always be a few steps too short From the gates that lead to affection |
Re: Fat
Right now, I am definitely able to relate to this as I'm having problems with my body image, however, I think you did an amazing job at writing it.
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Very well done!
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This is really nicely done and I loved the fourth stanza! ^.^
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