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WhisperingSilence April 8th 2017 11:47 AM

no name for this
 
when it all comes crashing down
the worlds caving in
trapped in a little bubble
shut off from everything around you
the emptiness filling you up
the xbox humming
the planes over head
shit.

Celyn April 9th 2017 09:17 AM

Re: no name for this
 
I love the 'trapped in a little bubble part' very fitting for when your world has come crashing down around you!

hocus pocus April 9th 2017 01:40 PM

Re: no name for this
 
I like the part Holly mentioned as well. It definitely puts a picture into my mind.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ April 9th 2017 06:43 PM

Re: no name for this
 
Short but well done!

.Brittany. April 13th 2017 09:28 PM

Re: no name for this
 
As mentioned above, I loved the part with the bubble.

Kintsukuroi. April 16th 2017 03:18 AM

Re: no name for this
 
I loved this part:
Quote:

when it all comes crashing down
the worlds caving in
trapped in a little bubble


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