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NeuroBeautiful March 17th 2017 12:55 AM

I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
You're telling me
"What's wrong with you?"
"You're crazy"
"I am going to tell dad on you"

I said go away, get out of the kitchen, leave me alone
I swear I will throw this pot of water on you
Get out get out get out


GET OUT!

shaking, trembling, clutching the broom
Ready to strike with the broom


"I can do what I want, nana nana nana nana"
Get out!
"I can do what I want, lalalalala"
LEAVE ME ALONE
"I can do whatever I want and you cant stop me hahahahahahaha"

SPLASH!


"bipolar"
"freak"
"violent"
"terrorist"
"crazy"
"madness"
"monster"
"bad"

I've become everything you've said I am

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ March 17th 2017 02:10 AM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
You're not a bad person at all. :hug: And I also like the way you narrated this.

hocus pocus March 19th 2017 01:45 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
I like how this poem resembles a conversation. You're not a bad person in the least bit. <3

DeletedAccount69 March 19th 2017 10:39 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
You're not a bad person. I hope writing this helped in some way.

Storyteller. March 19th 2017 11:48 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
I agree with the others, this is really well written but it's absolutely not true. :hug:

Celyn March 21st 2017 04:50 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
As the others have said, you're not a bad person at all :hug: But I do like how it starts with 'you're telling me' and ends with 'I've become everything you said I am' Very powerful!

.Brittany. March 21st 2017 08:21 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
I really enjoyed reading this. Very well done.

DeletedAccount16 March 21st 2017 09:05 PM

Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was
 
I'm glad you got your feelings out in this poem, but I want to assure you that you aren't anywhere near being a bad person. :hug:


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