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I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 17th 2017, 01:55 AM

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You're telling me
"What's wrong with you?"
"You're crazy"
"I am going to tell dad on you"

I said go away, get out of the kitchen, leave me alone
I swear I will throw this pot of water on you
Get out get out get out


GET OUT!

shaking, trembling, clutching the broom
Ready to strike with the broom


"I can do what I want, nana nana nana nana"
Get out!
"I can do what I want, lalalalala"
LEAVE ME ALONE
"I can do whatever I want and you cant stop me hahahahahahaha"

SPLASH!


"bipolar"
"freak"
"violent"
"terrorist"
"crazy"
"madness"
"monster"
"bad"

I've become everything you've said I am
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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 17th 2017, 03:10 AM

You're not a bad person at all. And I also like the way you narrated this.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 19th 2017, 02:45 PM

I like how this poem resembles a conversation. You're not a bad person in the least bit. <3


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 19th 2017, 11:39 PM

You're not a bad person. I hope writing this helped in some way.
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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 20th 2017, 12:48 AM

I agree with the others, this is really well written but it's absolutely not true.


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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 21st 2017, 05:50 PM

As the others have said, you're not a bad person at all But I do like how it starts with 'you're telling me' and ends with 'I've become everything you said I am' Very powerful!


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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 21st 2017, 09:21 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. Very well done.



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Re: I'm a bad person and everything else you've said I was - March 21st 2017, 10:05 PM

I'm glad you got your feelings out in this poem, but I want to assure you that you aren't anywhere near being a bad person.
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