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never ever - February 2nd 2017, 07:30 PM
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I'm never going to earn a wage
That's ever going to support me
I'm never going to be the age
That's ever going to soothe me*
I'm never going to find an escape
That can ever be safe and set me free

Im never going to be enough
Im never going to be worth it
Im never going to toughen up

Im never going to create my life
The way I need it
The way I imagined it
The way I can feel alive*

I see a wall going on and on
Searching for a door in the dark, alone
I'm wondering how long?
Will I find one at all?

There's thousands of others fighting for their life
While I am fighting so much for my death
I got no strength

I can't imagine a life beyond the walls
The world is so big and I'm so small
I am a big ball of perpetual nothingness

I'm never going to make it out there
I'm never going to make it out of here
I'm never going to make it through

I'm never ever going to make it through
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Re: never ever - February 3rd 2017, 03:10 AM
I liked all of this, I can feel the emotion here. This part is my favorite.

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I can't imagine a life beyond the walls
The world is so big and I'm so small
I am a big ball of perpetual nothingness

I'm never going to make it out there
I'm never going to make it out of here
I'm never going to make it through

I'm never ever going to make it through
Hope to see more from you soon. <3

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Re: never ever - February 3rd 2017, 01:40 PM
I can definitely relate. But you can do this. <3

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: never ever - February 4th 2017, 08:59 PM
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There's thousands of others fighting for their life
While I am fighting so much for my death
I found this section particularly powerful, but the whole piece, as always, was well-written and full of emotion. Looking forward to your next work.

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Re: never ever - February 5th 2017, 04:32 AM
I really liked this Susan. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: never ever - February 5th 2017, 07:57 PM
This was amazing.

I loved this part:
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There's thousands of others fighting for their life
While I am fighting so much for my death
I got no strength

I can't imagine a life beyond the walls
The world is so big and I'm so small
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Re: never ever - February 9th 2017, 04:27 AM
You definitely have a lot of skill when it comes to writing. I always love reading your stuff. Keep up the good work. This was really well done!


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