Triggering: Ring around

[NeuroBeautiful]

"Ring around your mouth
Now you can't shout
A slap on your face
To keep you in place
You can't hide from me"

Ring around hell
Who am I? I can't tell
Is my spirit with me or somewhere far?
Not sure, but soon
I won't have to care at all

Ring around my eyes
Haven't slept in nights
A pocket full
Of knives and pills
Blood splatters, wall dissolves
Falling down
Cold floor
Alone.


Ring around the casket
A body full of secrets
Close the lid, lock it shut
She takes them to her grave

[Elision]

This is a very beautiful poem, I found it very sad. I really found the emotion came through powerfully, thanks for sharing

[hocus pocus]

Wow. I adore the style you wrote this in. I was drawn in from the beginning with the emotion and everything. It's sad, but beautiful.