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NeuroBeautiful

September 6th 2016 02:44 PM

Not that kind of love

I dont really like it, I just need need to write I guess.

You have a different kind of love
A kind of love
full of rage
shakes me in fear
A special kind of love that makes me want to disappear

I was born on the battlefield
forced into military training
I am screaming
I am pleading
Get me out of here

He already pickled my heart and chewed up my soul
I feel it in my guts, there's this massive empty hole
I will draw all my blood out
Pour it in a ditch in the ground
Bury it before he can see
Before he gets here
Because, he is after my blood
He is after my blood
He is after me

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

September 6th 2016 02:48 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

This is super thought provoking and very well done.

hocus pocus

September 6th 2016 08:41 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

I like the line about it being a special kind of love that makes you want to disappear, and the part about being born in a boot camp. I like it all though! Hope to see more from you soon.

Insomniac

September 7th 2016 09:04 AM

Re: Not that kind of love

You conveyed the emotion very well. My favorite part is the repetition of the phrase "he is after my blood", I definitely felt the urgency and panic behind it. Great job!

NeuroBeautiful

September 7th 2016 06:15 PM

Re: Not that kind of love

Thank you, all of you :3

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