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memories. - September 2nd 2016, 07:42 PM
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i've got scars,
i've got memories,
running across my skin,
reminding me of the person i used to be,
i've got scars,
i've got memories,
reminding me of the way things could have been,
i've got secrets,
i've got scars,
i've got memories,
running across my skin,
reminding me of the past,
i've scars, secrets and memories,
marks of madness running along my skin,
help me please.

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Re: memories. - September 3rd 2016, 12:26 PM
This is really beautiful mate.
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Re: memories. - September 3rd 2016, 09:47 PM
I agree, this is pretty. I can relate, especially to the line about memories running across your skin. It actually reminds me of having a physical urge to self-harm or a flashback of some sort that feels like there's something crawling across or under your skin.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: memories. - September 3rd 2016, 10:30 PM
The repetition works so we'll in this poem, it is really good. Thank you for sharing

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Re: memories. - September 3rd 2016, 10:45 PM
I like the pattern made by the repetition, it gets the message across in a really fluent and creative way and gives it some flow. It's a really good piece of writing.
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Re: memories. - September 5th 2016, 10:32 PM
Beautifully written! <3

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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