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what if
What If What if, one day Instead of, Being that person who holds it all together I let go, and... Just put down the weight of the world Resting on my shoulders Lay it d o w n Onto a table, or Maybe even a storage drawer So I can take that deep breath I was told would help On the days I cry, and yell and beg Someone to hear me, how much I carry For now I try to put it down on paper Maybe that will help me lift the burden, Enough to breathe again |
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I can definitely relate and this was written really well.
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This was an interesting style, and a really powerful message. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you both! It has been such a long time since I've written a poem and posted it here.
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that was a very good poem
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Thank you Crystal
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I can relate to this. I enjoyed the way you set it up as well!
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Glad to see a new poem from you! <3 It's nicely done and I think a lot of people can relate to it.
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Thank you both of you
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