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fix me - May 9th 2016, 11:27 AM

section 136,
its not something pills will just fix,
its not a magic cure,
you can add pills into the mix,
section 136,
you aint get those blades back,
you cant fix me,
section 136

'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''

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Re: fix me - May 9th 2016, 12:10 PM

I'm so sorry you are going through this pain.

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Re: fix me - May 9th 2016, 04:44 PM

I like the repetition of section 136 in this.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive

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Re: fix me - May 10th 2016, 12:56 PM

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I like the repetition of section 136 in this.

I agree with this. I thought the repetition made the poem flow really well.

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Re: fix me - May 11th 2016, 06:54 AM

This is nicely written. I hope things are okay though and that you're take care of yourself.

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Re: fix me - May 12th 2016, 12:26 AM

I agree, I like the repetition, too. Keep hanging on.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first

The axe forgets, but the tree remembers

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