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Eyes
Can't you see the fear inside ?
The distant look and plea for help behind my eyes ? Can't you see it ? Tell me you can Tell me you can Can't you see the tears waiting to fall ? The tears that hold the secrets I long to tell Can't you see it ? Please tell me you can Please tell me you can Can't you see the pain behind my eyes ? |
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I like all the questions asked.
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I think the repetition is very powerful.
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This is so good. I love the questions asked.
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I really relate to this:
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This is powerful and I liked these two lines a lot:
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