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WhisperingSilence

January 4th 2016 04:20 PM

Eyes

Can't you see the fear inside ?
The distant look and plea for help behind my eyes ?
Can't you see it ?
Tell me you can
Tell me you can
Can't you see the tears waiting to fall ?
The tears that hold the secrets I long to tell
Can't you see it ?
Please tell me you can
Please tell me you can
Can't you see the pain behind my eyes ?

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

January 4th 2016 09:06 PM

Re: Eyes

I like all the questions asked.

hocus pocus

January 5th 2016 05:41 AM

Re: Eyes

I think the repetition is very powerful.

Sophrosyne

January 8th 2016 01:32 AM

Re: Eyes

This is so good. I love the questions asked.

MsNobleEleanor

January 8th 2016 10:48 AM

Re: Eyes

I really relate to this:

Quote:

Can't you see the fear inside ?
The distant look and plea for help behind my eyes ?
Can't you see it ?

I really like this, it's short but shares so many emotions.

Kintsukuroi.

January 16th 2016 05:10 AM

Re: Eyes

This is powerful and I liked these two lines a lot:

Quote:

Can't you see the tears waiting to fall ?
The tears that hold the secrets I long to tell

Hang in there. :hug:

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