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Eyes - January 4th 2016, 05:20 PM
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Can't you see the fear inside ?
The distant look and plea for help behind my eyes ?
Can't you see it ?
Tell me you can
Tell me you can
Can't you see the tears waiting to fall ?
The tears that hold the secrets I long to tell
Can't you see it ?
Please tell me you can
Please tell me you can
Can't you see the pain behind my eyes ?

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Re: Eyes - January 4th 2016, 10:06 PM
I like all the questions asked.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Eyes - January 5th 2016, 06:41 AM
I think the repetition is very powerful.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: Eyes - January 8th 2016, 02:32 AM
This is so good. I love the questions asked.

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Re: Eyes - January 8th 2016, 11:48 AM
I really relate to this:

Quote:
Can't you see the fear inside ?
The distant look and plea for help behind my eyes ?
Can't you see it ?
I really like this, it's short but shares so many emotions.

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Re: Eyes - January 16th 2016, 06:10 AM
This is powerful and I liked these two lines a lot:
Quote:
Can't you see the tears waiting to fall ?
The tears that hold the secrets I long to tell
Hang in there.
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