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Poem - September 2nd 2015, 04:35 AM
Noot noot! I can't remember what this kind of poem is called off the top of my head, but no one cares!

Feminist
Equals equality?
"Men are evil"
"We don't need them"
This is going nowhere fast.
Are we women really discriminated against?
Surely not any more than men, though.
Wake up! The "wage gap" is a lie!
Our society is not as patriarchal as you think!
If that is the case, why are women always whining?
"Life sucks! I deserve better than this!" They say.
"I was cat-called! I feel so offended!"
"You try being female for a day!"
"But you have to hold doors."
"Be a gentleman, you sexist!"
"I'm better than you!"
Such is feminism.
Rather ironic,
No?

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Re: Poem - September 2nd 2015, 09:02 PM
I like the formatting of this!

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: Poem - September 3rd 2015, 02:43 PM
I like how you wrote this, you've expressed your point really well.
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Re: Poem - September 3rd 2015, 07:29 PM
Really well thought out!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Poem - September 4th 2015, 03:36 AM
Thank you! ^_^ It just seems like this point of view is very rarely expressed in an appropriate way.

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Re: Poem - September 6th 2015, 04:07 AM
I like how you wrote this!
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