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august 22 poem - August 26th 2015, 01:48 AM

Youre well hidden here
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Tears that engrave into your skin
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Re: august 22 poem - August 26th 2015, 01:52 AM

Short but really well written. I liked it!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive

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Re: august 22 poem - August 26th 2015, 02:06 AM

This is really well written!

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Re: august 22 poem - August 27th 2015, 09:06 AM

I liked this but I loved the last two lines.

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Re: august 22 poem - August 28th 2015, 02:40 AM

Thank you all of you <3

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Re: august 22 poem - August 28th 2015, 09:00 PM

Something about this kind of gave me chills. This is awesome! Definitely keep writing.

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Re: august 22 poem - August 29th 2015, 12:40 AM

Thank you Hollie
For some reason I just reread it and realized the first line is missing. I'm not sure if it will change your idea of the poem but the first line should have been "wild snore stalks surround you" with the rest following.

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