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WhisperingSilence

July 19th 2015 11:02 AM

empty shell

Take my word , believe me please,
I damned if I do, Damned if I dont,
Take all that I have, take it all,
Haven't you realized
I'm already dead inside ?
Your just looking at the empty shell,
Take my hand, help me through,
Hear me out, scars so deep,
Cuts and bruises , nothing in reality,
Haven't you realized,
I'm dead inside?
The empty shell, and a blank canvas,
The person I used to be gone in a flash,
Take my word believe me please,
Help me through ,
My canvas is blank and needs it colour.

Mahray

July 19th 2015 11:09 AM

Re: empty shell

Wowsers. Not a long piece, but filled with feels.

Palmolive

July 19th 2015 01:36 PM

Re: empty shell

I like this :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

July 20th 2015 01:20 AM

Re: empty shell

I like all of this but especially the ending!

Chai.

July 20th 2015 02:06 AM

Re: empty shell

I like this! And I agree with Dez, I especially liked the ending.

Kintsukuroi.

July 20th 2015 04:12 AM

Re: empty shell

I really liked these lines:

Quote:

The empty shell, and a blank canvas,
The person I used to be gone in a flash,

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