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Not_here

April 12th 2015 08:43 PM

vent poem

You cannot charge at me and watch me cry too
You cannot have both.
I will not allow it.
I will not!

If you charge, I charge
I will claw at you
So that when you are too busy crying, I
can sneak in a cry too
I hear you but you'll never hear me
Because you don't care

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

April 13th 2015 02:05 AM

Re: vent poem

I like the second stanza!

Kintsukuroi.

April 14th 2015 09:09 AM

Re: vent poem

I really liked these two lines:

Quote:

You cannot charge at me and watch me cry too
You cannot have both.

hocus pocus

April 14th 2015 06:38 PM

Re: vent poem

This is really powerful, keep sharing your writing! :)

IH8U2

April 16th 2015 10:04 AM

Re: vent poem

The second stanza is great.

Not_here

April 19th 2015 12:59 AM

Re: vent poem

Thank you all of you

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