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WhisperingSilence

March 5th 2015 08:35 AM

mondays child.

Mondays child was beaten black and blue,
Tuesdays child was locked in a room,
Wednesdays child was called names and shouted at,
Thursdays child went without food,
Fridays child was ignored and alone,
Saturdays child was kicked out of home,
Sundays child was scared for what the following week would hold.

hocus pocus

March 5th 2015 04:32 PM

Re: mondays child.

I like this! I think it's a really cool format, how you did each day of the week. :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

March 5th 2015 05:03 PM

Re: mondays child.

I really like how you did every day of the week here. :D

Kintsukuroi.

March 6th 2015 04:07 AM

Re: mondays child.

I really like how you included everyday of the week and how you wrote this.

.:PrincessZelda:.

March 6th 2015 10:25 AM

Re: mondays child.

This is really good! :)

Storyteller.

March 8th 2015 12:51 AM

Re: mondays child.

I love the structure, and that last line was so powerful. Thank you for sharing. :hug:

IH8U2

March 8th 2015 09:45 AM

Re: mondays child.

Last 3 lines make so much sense

DeletedAccount19

March 13th 2015 09:51 PM

Re: mondays child.

Thank you for sharing this, I love how you included every day of the week and the way you wrote it.

Not_here

March 14th 2015 11:02 AM

Re: mondays child.

Like others have mentioned the days of the week format really worked and it brought out the meaning so well

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