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March 5th 2015, 09:35 AM
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Mondays child was beaten black and blue,
Tuesdays child was locked in a room,
Wednesdays child was called names and shouted at,
Thursdays child went without food,
Fridays child was ignored and alone,
Saturdays child was kicked out of home,
Sundays child was scared for what the following week would hold.
'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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March 5th 2015, 05:32 PM
I like this! I think it's a really cool format, how you did each day of the week. 
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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March 5th 2015, 06:03 PM
I really like how you did every day of the week here. 
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: mondays child. -
March 6th 2015, 05:07 AM
I really like how you included everyday of the week and how you wrote this.
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March 6th 2015, 11:25 AM
This is really good!
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March 8th 2015, 01:51 AM
I love the structure, and that last line was so powerful. Thank you for sharing. 
"Love means never having to say you're a werewolf."
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Re: mondays child. -
March 8th 2015, 10:45 AM
Last 3 lines make so much sense
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Re: mondays child. -
March 13th 2015, 10:51 PM
Thank you for sharing this, I love how you included every day of the week and the way you wrote it.
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Re: mondays child. -
March 14th 2015, 12:02 PM
Like others have mentioned the days of the week format really worked and it brought out the meaning so well
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