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Season's Poem
Okay, so I wrote this poem in like 10 minutes, and I don't know if it's good or not, so if anyone has any constructive criticism, then that would be great... It's for a friend for a secret Santa :)
I sit in the chilling, cold December Thinking back to the trees changing in October The falling leaves The cool wind running through my hair I sit and think about how the trees change During every month of every year Spring time is a beautiful time Where leaves and flowers grow All the bloom from the cold of winter Has finally sprung up and brought color to us Temperatures get warmer And the sun comes out from hiding Summer time is a hot time Where the sun always shines Children go out and play As the grass is green And the sky is blue The perfect whether to go out When the fall hits The warm weather turns cold And the green leaves turn brown All the nature that grew months before Are now falling down to the ground And the warm air starts to cool Now the winter is here Snow will be falling from the gray sky Scarves and gloves will be pulled out It's the countdown to Christmas as December hits And everyone rushes to buy presents Before roasting marshmallows on the fire As the end of the year nears Everyone's glad a new year will be starting People are turning over an old leaf To start a new year with happiness And for the seasons to run again that year This is why I love the different seasons And how the trees change during the months |
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This is pretty! :D
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Re: Season's Poem
I liked this a lot. Thank you for sharing it. :)
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I like the use of time. It helps keep the piece flowing well :)
Some lovely imagery also! |
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