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Zedd	September 7th 2014 03:16 AM

A Poem?

I'm throwing a triggering tag on this cuz it probably is. During one of my bouts of extreme insomnia, I was thinking about the past at around 4:30 a.m., and I found myself writing. Here's the result:

Tired eyes, and sunshine,
We followed the moon away from mankind,
Our heads in the stars and our eyes far too blind
to see the ground bellow.

Bloody Knees and bruised hips,
we sailed away in our ships,
taking long acid trips,
our eyes cloudy and our faces muddy,
too distracted to know we were lost.

Bright eyes and dim thoughts,
we drowned ourselves with pills and shots
thinking we were immune to sickness or blood clots,
but still unsafe from the future.

Azure.

September 7th 2014 03:23 AM

Re: A Poem?

I love the rhythm of this! Sometimes late nights bring beautiful results and I think this is one of those times. :) I'd love to see more of your work!

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

September 7th 2014 03:31 AM

Re: A Poem?

This really tells a story!

Zedd	September 7th 2014 03:40 AM

Re: A Poem?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lucent. (Post 1134147)

I love the rhythm of this! Sometimes late nights bring beautiful results and I think this is one of those times. :) I'd love to see more of your work!

Thanks! I actually have a lot of insomnia fueled writing which I might post, depending on how good it actually is. Often when I write it is when I can finally fall asleep, and I'll wake up with stuff I don't even remember writing sometimes.

Koharuchan

September 7th 2014 06:17 AM

Re: A Poem?

More of your work. Post it now or I infract you. This is your first and only warning. XD

Really though, you do some great work. You should post more. :)

Kintsukuroi.

September 7th 2014 06:21 AM

Re: A Poem?

This is good :) you should post more! :)

.:PrincessZelda:.

September 7th 2014 05:01 PM

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This was really good! :)

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

September 8th 2014 08:19 AM

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This is really good :)

Zedd	September 12th 2014 01:50 AM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Koharuchan (Post 1134185)

More of your work. Post it now or I infract you. This is your first and only warning. XD

Really though, you do some great work. You should post more. :)

On it, boss. Posting more random poetry now.

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