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Trying to figure my life out..
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Another Poem.(No Name) -
May 1st 2014, 03:21 AM
You've put me through pain,
No one should have to endure,
I hate you, inside and out,
For me, theres no cure.
No blood,no pain, no tears, will help,
Don't come back,I don't need you here,
You're my enemy, should seen it comin'
Here, will soon be the place you fear.
You're not who you said you were,
You're the devil himself, Fuck you.
Go away, never return..you're not welcome.
You beautiful blue eyes..Fuck them too!
I'm erasing you from my mind,
You faked your love, for me
You lied, I cried, I don't give a damn,
But to thank you, Meet my Army.
They'll eat you, chew you, spit you out,
They'll tie you up, and make you scream,
You'll be in so much pain emotionally,
You'll wish this was a fucking dream.
Sadly this is no dream, this is real life..
Should've remembered who you're messing with,
Mess with me, and you'll regret it.
I told you this wasn't a fucking myth.
My family is strong, and don't put up with shit..
You've entered hell itself. WELCOME..Bitch.
You've really hurt me and my family.
But to thank you, welcome to this ditch.
Goodbye, you've had your warning.
Never fuck with a strong headed family,
You'll regret every minute of it if you do..
Goodbye for good,You're lucky you're free. I don't know, if this is more of a rant then a poem. OH and sorry for the strong language
The name for this poem is "Death Sentence"
Waiting is a sign of true love and patience,anyone can say "I love you" But not everyone can wait and prove it's true.
Some say it's painful to wait for someone,Some say it's painful to forget someone,But the worst pain comes when you don't know whether to wait or forget.
Last edited by Beautiful_Mess; May 1st 2014 at 03:55 AM.
Reason: Thought of a name for it
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Filling My Panties.
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Re: Another Poem.(No Name) -
May 2nd 2014, 12:03 AM
It's great that you put all of your emotions into your writing.  I thought that this was really powerful and I love the ideas and the imagery in this. Great work!
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Living the dream.
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Re: Another Poem.(No Name) -
May 2nd 2014, 01:47 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one!
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Trying to figure my life out..
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Re: Another Poem.(No Name) -
May 2nd 2014, 10:53 AM
Thank you guys.
Waiting is a sign of true love and patience,anyone can say "I love you" But not everyone can wait and prove it's true.
Some say it's painful to wait for someone,Some say it's painful to forget someone,But the worst pain comes when you don't know whether to wait or forget.
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Re: Another Poem.(No Name) -
May 4th 2014, 01:02 PM
This reminded me of an incident in my life!
You have written this so feel I can feel the emotion strongly.
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