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WhisperingSilence April 29th 2014 04:31 PM

Weapons of mass destruction
 
i am silver and shiny,
i can cause harm yet i'm so small and tiny,
i can cause more destruction and damage
than you can ever imagine...
i fit inside a pocket in my protective bag,
i'm a friend in the dark night when life seems to drag,
i can create a river of crimson red to flow,
just watch me go and my rampage of destruction,
i can leave marks and scars if you let me to,
i'll make you think you need me,
i'll make you hate me,
i'll be there when nothing else works
i am your friend, your weapon of mass destruction
i am silver and shiny
i can cause harm even though i am so small and tiny,
this war isn't over yet.....
i am a blade a weapon of mass destruction

MsNobleEleanor April 29th 2014 09:09 PM

Re: Weapons of mass destruction
 
I really liked reading this. Very powerful and vivid. Each line is written beautifully and very talented. :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ April 30th 2014 12:35 AM

Re: Weapons of mass destruction
 
I can totally relate to this!

Azure. April 30th 2014 02:12 AM

Re: Weapons of mass destruction
 
I love how you tied the beginning to the ending! Great work. :)

DeletedAccount12 April 30th 2014 03:45 AM

Re: Weapons of mass destruction
 
This is written really well and uniquely. I like this a lot!

Storyteller. May 1st 2014 09:43 AM

Re: Weapons of mass destruction
 
I loved the descriptiveness and the way you tied everything in together. Thanks for sharing; I hope to see more of your work soon. :)


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