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WhisperingSilence

April 20th 2014 10:39 AM

Tidal Wave

The images plague my mind,
Rising higher and higher till my minds consumed,
Drowning in the thoughts and the images,
It's like I'm a slave,
A slave to your cruel endless games,
Like a tidal wave,
Your words and violence a tsunami of spoken violent destruction,
The waves rise higher and higher ,
Drowning me in a sea of people of violence and name calling,
Only for the sea and the tsunami and the tidal waves of names and torment,
To send me crashing into the wall,
While wishing I had never been born.

Azure.

April 20th 2014 12:20 PM

Re: Tidal Wave

This is such a powerful poem. :) I really enjoyed it- you should post more! :hehe:

Storyteller.

April 20th 2014 01:12 PM

Re: Tidal Wave

I loved the emotion behind this, and the way it flowed* together. :hug:

*See what I did there? 'Flowed', because it's about waves? Yeah, I'm not funny. :p

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

April 20th 2014 04:26 PM

Re: Tidal Wave

Ha, Chessmaid's joke. XD

But in all seriousness, you put everything together really well here! :D

DeletedAccount12

April 21st 2014 12:14 AM

Re: Tidal Wave

I laughed at Chessmaid's joke. XD

But she's right, it does "flow" nicely. :p It's very emotional!

nothereanymore

April 21st 2014 12:57 AM

Re: Tidal Wave

I loved this! I loved the way it all came together like a statement, almost like a run on sentence, that didn't feel like reading a poem, but someone actually speaking to me. I absolutely enjoyed reading this. :) Keep writing!

mindflower

April 23rd 2014 01:01 AM

Re: Tidal Wave

Omygosh so good :dem:

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