Triggering: Tidal Wave

[WhisperingSilence]

The images plague my mind,
Rising higher and higher till my minds consumed,
Drowning in the thoughts and the images,
It's like I'm a slave,
A slave to your cruel endless games,
Like a tidal wave,
Your words and violence a tsunami of spoken violent destruction,
The waves rise higher and higher ,
Drowning me in a sea of people of violence and name calling,
Only for the sea and the tsunami and the tidal waves of names and torment,
To send me crashing into the wall,
While wishing I had never been born.

[Azure.]

This is such a powerful poem. I really enjoyed it- you should post more!

[Storyteller.]

I loved the emotion behind this, and the way it flowed* together.

*See what I did there? 'Flowed', because it's about waves? Yeah, I'm not funny.

[¯|_(ツ)_|¯]

Ha, Chessmaid's joke.

But in all seriousness, you put everything together really well here!

I laughed at Chessmaid's joke.

But she's right, it does "flow" nicely. It's very emotional!

[nothereanymore]

I loved this! I loved the way it all came together like a statement, almost like a run on sentence, that didn't feel like reading a poem, but someone actually speaking to me. I absolutely enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!

[mindflower]

Omygosh so good