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Not_here

April 11th 2014 01:38 AM

nature poem

The caterpillar slinks
blending in harmony
whispering secrets
in codes.
The leaf, eager to host
receptive, open
welcoming, warm.

Hold on tight to me,
let us dwell in the layers of grass
Once we’re picked up by humans,
hands examin us closely
our safety unknown
what lies ahead, I cannot tell
let us hold on, for all we have
is each other.

Azure.

April 11th 2014 01:43 AM

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I love this! D: The second stanza is my favorite part. :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯

April 11th 2014 01:48 AM

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I totally agree with Jenna here! All of this painted a picture though.

Not_here

April 11th 2014 02:57 AM

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thank you Jenna and Dez

DeletedAccount12

April 11th 2014 03:26 AM

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I like this! Nature is a wonderful thing to write about. :)

Twinge

April 11th 2014 01:02 PM

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You've really improved in form, gryff. I'm pleased. Congrats.

Not_here

April 12th 2014 01:43 AM

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thank you Serena
and Sprint, I'm happy I improved. It's encouraging to hear that, especially from you.

hocus pocus

April 12th 2014 02:47 AM

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I like it! And I'm so happy to see you posting your work! :D

Not_here

April 12th 2014 04:49 AM

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thank you,
and somehow I got the courage D:

Raggedy Man, Goodnight!

April 13th 2014 02:11 PM

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I love this and I love nature :)

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