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Not_here April 11th 2014 01:38 AM

nature poem
 
The caterpillar slinks
blending in harmony
whispering secrets
in codes.
The leaf, eager to host
receptive, open
welcoming, warm.

Hold on tight to me,
let us dwell in the layers of grass
Once we’re picked up by humans,
hands examin us closely
our safety unknown
what lies ahead, I cannot tell
let us hold on, for all we have
is each other.

Azure. April 11th 2014 01:43 AM

Re: nature poem
 
I love this! D: The second stanza is my favorite part. :)

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ April 11th 2014 01:48 AM

Re: nature poem
 
I totally agree with Jenna here! All of this painted a picture though.

Not_here April 11th 2014 02:57 AM

Re: nature poem
 
thank you Jenna and Dez

DeletedAccount12 April 11th 2014 03:26 AM

Re: nature poem
 
I like this! Nature is a wonderful thing to write about. :)

Twinge April 11th 2014 01:02 PM

Re: nature poem
 
You've really improved in form, gryff. I'm pleased. Congrats.

Not_here April 12th 2014 01:43 AM

Re: nature poem
 
thank you Serena
and Sprint, I'm happy I improved. It's encouraging to hear that, especially from you.

hocus pocus April 12th 2014 02:47 AM

Re: nature poem
 
I like it! And I'm so happy to see you posting your work! :D

Not_here April 12th 2014 04:49 AM

Re: nature poem
 
thank you,
and somehow I got the courage D:

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! April 13th 2014 02:11 PM

Re: nature poem
 
I love this and I love nature :)


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