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Sinking - March 10th 2014, 10:17 PM
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The waves crash , big, scary and tall,
They are trying to knock her down,
She's not let them past or into her walls,
The mask won't slip,
She will smile, in her feelings she will drown,
She's sinking,
The waves crash,
They knock her down,
Dragging her away..
Onlookers can only watch her drown,
Her feelings the waves,
Her life dragging her down,
Emotions consuming making her drown.

'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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Re: Sinking - March 10th 2014, 10:21 PM
Awww...

What emotions..

They are strange combination of feelings, who knows what exactly they are..

Be strong

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Re: Sinking - March 11th 2014, 02:44 AM
I agree, so emotional!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Sinking - March 11th 2014, 03:58 AM
Wow, I really like this! The line where you said "Onlookers can only watch her drown" is a good description of how it feels.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: Sinking - March 11th 2014, 11:18 PM
There was so much emotion put into this. It was really relatable too! Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Sinking - March 12th 2014, 09:46 PM
I really liked how you described everything. I like it!
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Re: Sinking - March 14th 2014, 01:52 AM
I liked this and could relate to this quite a bit. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Sinking - March 14th 2014, 02:08 AM
This is really good.
Well done :-)
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