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Not_here March 4th 2014 08:26 PM
omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
It's such a cool poem guys...it brightened up my mood a teensy bit which is really hard to do :nosweat:


Quote:
Our generation will be known for nothing.
Never will anybody say,
We were the peak of mankind.
That is wrong, the truth is
Our generation was a failure.
Thinking that
We actually succeeded
Is a waste. And we know
Living only for money and power
Is the way to go.
Being loving, respectful, and kind
Is a dumb thing to do.
Forgetting about that time,
Will not be easy, but we will try.
Changing our world for the better
Is something we never did.
Giving up
Was how we handled our problems.
Working hard
Was a joke.
We knew that
People thought we couldn’t come back
That might be true,
Unless we turn things around
(Read from bottom to top now)


source: http://freedominfonet.net/14-year-ol...-21st-century/

Forging Galaxies March 4th 2014 09:09 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
Oh my god, this is awesome! :D

Such a creative way to do this!

Azure. March 4th 2014 09:09 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
This really made me think! I loved the ending. :hehe:
I also thought the article you included about it was really cool! Thanks for sharing. :)

stelles March 4th 2014 09:12 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
So cool! Thanks for putting the note at the bottom to read it backwards, I would never have noticed that...

DeletedAccount63 March 4th 2014 09:21 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I loved that. I would have never thought to read from bottom to top.

¯|_(ツ)_|¯ March 4th 2014 11:15 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I saw this on Tumblr once and found it awesome! Was nice to read it again!

Not_here March 4th 2014 11:54 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
yeah I found it today and I was like must show TH people. Anyways, just to clear things up a little, the note in the parenthesis is part of the poem :hehe:

hocus pocus March 5th 2014 12:01 AM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
Whoa, that was awesome! It made me smile. :D

Not_here March 5th 2014 12:42 AM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I'm glad you guys liked it ^_^

Eternal March 10th 2014 10:54 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I've moved this to Self Expression because I think it fits better here. :)

Tigereyes March 10th 2014 11:14 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
This is really cool. I like how just changing the way it was read changed the entire meaning of the poem. I may try writing a poem like that.

Awakening March 10th 2014 11:41 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I remember seeing this on tumblr and the post said it was written by a 14 year old, which really surprised me. It's an awesome poem and to think someone of that age could write something so great is pretty cool. It seems like it would be really difficult to write too! Obviously whoever wrote it is really talented.

mindflower March 12th 2014 04:58 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
I saw this on Twitter and freaked out in my class, its so amazingly written, I love it :)

DeletedAccount12 March 12th 2014 09:42 PM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!!!!!! This was AMAZING. It's so brilliantly written. D:

...at least I didn't freak out, right? :nosweat:

Raggedy Man, Goodnight! March 14th 2014 02:26 AM
Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share
 
That poem is awesome, I'm glad it cheered you up :D


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