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Volcano
I'm a volcano waiting to erupt,
The hot molten lava is bubbling over, Don't get to close, I'm not sure when I'll blow, I think you better stand back and just go, One, Two, Three, Four, The molten lava is heating up more and more, I'm a volcano waiting to erupt, Hot lava over flows, I explode, This volcano was ready to erupt, Till next time this volcano remains dormant.. Till the next eruption.. |
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I love the metaphor you used in this!
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EXCELLENT!!!
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I really love how you used a volcano as a metaphor to describe your feelings! :D This is awesome.
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This is brilliant! Very creative! I honestly love this piece! Great job! :D
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I love the metaphor too, very nice job!! :D
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I enjoyed the metaphor as well. Thank you for sharing.
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This is really really good Lyd! The volcano comparison is PERFECT! Keep up the good work!
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