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Volcano - January 4th 2014, 03:59 PM
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I'm a volcano waiting to erupt,
The hot molten lava is bubbling over,
Don't get to close, I'm not sure when I'll blow,
I think you better stand back and just go,
One, Two, Three, Four,
The molten lava is heating up more and more,
I'm a volcano waiting to erupt,
Hot lava over flows,
I explode,
This volcano was ready to erupt,
Till next time this volcano remains dormant..
Till the next eruption..

'There will be bad days, there will be good days, there will be really bad days, and really good days, and days that are not bad or good but just simply suck, but either way you got through it and you are here today and that is all that really matters''
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Re: Volcano - January 4th 2014, 04:18 PM
I love the metaphor you used in this!

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Re: Volcano - January 4th 2014, 08:11 PM
EXCELLENT!!!

I am the one who loved you. I am the one who stayed. I am the one and you walked away. I am the one who waited, and now you act like you just don't give a damn. Like you never knew who I am.
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Re: Volcano - January 4th 2014, 11:14 PM
I really love how you used a volcano as a metaphor to describe your feelings! This is awesome.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Volcano - January 5th 2014, 01:23 AM
This is brilliant! Very creative! I honestly love this piece! Great job!

~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~

~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~

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Re: Volcano - January 5th 2014, 03:11 AM
I love the metaphor too, very nice job!!

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madness is genius;
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring."

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Re: Volcano - January 8th 2014, 01:49 AM
I enjoyed the metaphor as well. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Volcano - January 8th 2014, 02:02 AM
This is really really good Lyd! The volcano comparison is PERFECT! Keep up the good work!

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