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A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 11:49 AM
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Screaming And Shouting
But nobody hears me
These words in my head
Just cant seem to escape

I beg and I plead
But my voice is silent
Like a shroud of darkness
No one can see me

This pain is overwhelming
These wounds will never heal
Bloody and bruised
Exhausted and week

I've been here too long
I've fought too hard
My body is broken
And my time is up

(I know, it's horrible, but I haven't written in like, 5 to 7 years, I don't even remember.)
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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 11:55 AM
Don't be so hard on yourself. I really enjoyed this.

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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 02:24 PM
I like it! You should keep writing, it's a great outlet

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 02:46 PM
Hey Caitlyn

It's a great poem. It's good that you are getting back in the writing groove. Hope to see you write more!
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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 03:45 PM
i like it

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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 05:07 PM
Caitymaid! I like this. I think you should write more often. Shake off those cobwebs and I bet you'll be good to go!

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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 15th 2013, 08:58 PM
I like it! Keep writing- you'll get back into it soon

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Re: A Poem attempt after 5+ years of silence - October 17th 2013, 05:29 AM
This wasn't horrible. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
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