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another cheesy poem -_-
Ripped and torn, into shattered bits
I find your arm with open slits your mind is stuck, your brain is dead Written on paper but nothing said but The stage is yours, for all to see show them, show them who you can really be do not be blinded by shining light because what is wrong is always right so Step over your limit, Step over the line take what was never yours but always mine criticize what was always good and praise yourself for what you could Let your words always be true and allow your emotions to come right through feel the ringing in your ears and Know what is minutes, may be years but here and behold, it's finally done You didn't cry, you didn't run it's over and now you can finally see this is you, this who your meant to be - by Meris a lame ass free writer. I hate this poem but oh fucking well, |
Re: another cheesy poem -_-
I personally think it's good. D:
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Re: another cheesy poem -_-
i hate it ..ugh
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Re: another cheesy poem -_-
I think everyone is a bit more critical of their own work than the work of others.
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Re: another cheesy poem -_-
Yeah, everyone is critical when it comes to their work because they know all of the places where things COULD be worded better.
I personally think it's not bad at all, maybe needs some accenting. But I guess it's in the style. |
Re: another cheesy poem -_-
now, i want to delete it :(
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Re: another cheesy poem -_-
I also think its really good, I hope you carry on writing poems.
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Re: another cheesy poem -_-
thanks, i'll try to
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