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Arrow my broken china doll poem - April 11th 2013, 08:56 AM

i came up with this like 4 years ago.. ahaha but it's my personal favorite that i ever came up with.(:



Broken China doll,

Your face is cracked and creased,

it seems your beauty has died,

as the spider webs have increased.



Broken China doll,

the paint on you is fading,

as shadows set place,

these old memories are waning.



Broken China doll,

your face used to shine bright.

One day some one will find you,

to fill your cracks with light.



Broken China doll,

You once bathed in words and company;

so promising and serene.

Now lost and forgotten,

your beauty is unseen.



Broken China doll,

Please do not die,

and deteriorate from within;

because beauty still grows even in a darkening dim.
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Re: my broken china doll poem - April 11th 2013, 11:36 AM

I love this so much! I like how you started every line with "Broken China doll." This is well written in general.


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Re: my broken china doll poem - April 11th 2013, 11:30 PM

I agree with Dez, this is really good! I also liked how you started each line with "Broken China Doll." Very well written!


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Re: my broken china doll poem - April 12th 2013, 12:18 PM

I agree! I love this a lot. It's really well-written.
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Re: my broken china doll poem - April 13th 2013, 12:26 AM

I really liked this. Thank you for sharing.
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